What's in my mind

Your eyes, emeraldgreen
Most beautiful I've ever seen

Thoughts, chaos in my mind
A storm, making my eyes blind

Like a merry-go-round
I'm feeling off the ground

Rainbows appear
Whenever you come near

Two bodies in motion
Drowning in loves ocean

Take me higher, bring me above
On the rollercoaster of love

I'm open wide
For you. Tonight.

Published by sweetii

5 years ago

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foundnemo04 3 years ago

Nice!

Java-Joe 4 years ago

I'm thinking about my former lover lately. This poem reminds me of our first time. It was unexpected, and VERY risky, so there was a lot of free-fall. It was lovely (beautiful, emeraldgreen, rainbows) and scary (chaos, drowning, rollercoaster) all at the same time. Thanks, Julia, for the reminders. Can you say if what you've written above is based on your experience or your imagination?

Java-Joe 5 years ago

to sweetii : I can see part of your journey through language when I read this poem. It makes me very curious about you.

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sweetii Publisher 5 years ago

to Java-Joe : Yes, it is written by me. Very happy if you like it

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Java-Joe 5 years ago

Did you write this? I could not do this well in German

Tattedchica is right - "erotic and emotional" come right through. Thank you for sharing this art.

sweetii Publisher 5 years ago

to Tattedchica : Thank you!

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Tattedchica 5 years ago

Really nice post... erotic and emotional

sweetii Publisher 5 years ago

to Bea_S : Danke dir liebe Bea!

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Bea_S 5 years ago

Wow! Wunderschön.