“A French Tale”


Dinner at the café was nice. The restaurant was deserted, streets were quiet & the waiter remained unobtrusive. We sipped our wine, ate our meal but mostly just looked and smiled at each other. Now we are walking along the banks of the Seine River: sometimes holding hands, sometimes a playful push…talking about everything & nothing at all. You are dressed in a black turtle neck, red & black plaid pleated skirt – knee length to accentuate your legs…black leg stockings & pumps. A red beret caps your head...you are beautiful. Myself? A simple leather jacket, t-shirt & jeans…we are casual tonight with nothing to do and plenty of time to do it.

Finally we find ourselves at the Parc du Champ de Mars, home of the Eiffel Tower . We stand at the base with a group of people waiting for the elevator. When it arrives everyone starts to board, I extend my arm to stop you – we’ll take the next one. It arrives & we get on - the only ones. As it ascends we look out at the sights… Champs Elysees …Palais de Chaillot…Basillica de Montemarte…the Arc de Triomphe…the City of Lights glowing all around us.

I stop the elevator unexpectedly as you look at me surprised & puzzled. I quickly rush over to you, wrapping my arm around your waist pulling you close; my hand behind your head…kissing you, rubbing your face. My hand slides down, pulling up your skirt up (you have no underwear on) & begins feeling between your legs, squeezing your thighs & then gradually fingering your crotch…. I drop down to my knees and quickly nibble at your inner thighs. It’s happening too fast you think at first & then appreciate my urgency…this is the Eiffel Tower…the elevator won’t stay stuck for long! I push my face into your crotch pressing my tongue between the folds of your lips…you help by rhythmically forcing your pelvis back & forth, humping my face & nose.

The city lights & flowing traffic below…the crowd over head…you raise one long leg & rest it on the railing allowing me greater access to you. As you throw your head back, I continue to suck & nibble on your lips probing you with my tongue. I bring my hand up, my thumb swirling round enters into you…your clit protruding…so hard. You look down at me, watching, smiling, my eyes closed & face glistening as you’ve already cum once…bite it Cal …please bite it you think! I move up…lightly licking your clit…then nibbling…and finally sucking it in and biting down…your hands clasp the back of my head & rubbing my face, you push me in…your hips grinding - your crotch f__king my mouth!!!

This is just too good…you’re dripping…moaning...an occasional spasm...eyes closed when my finger suddenly slides into your anus! You let out a gasp….head thrown back…almost spinning! Now I’m sucking & biting your clit…my thumb & finger both inside you pinching together…you just keep Cumming & Cumming…you want to scream…both hands clamped at the sides of my head…pulling at my hair. I just keep sucking & licking your lips…clit…chewing…shaking my head until finally I make the last push & freeze…I hold you as your hips spasm & buck…all your muscles become tense as your thighs squeeze tighter holding me in place. You pull me deeper into you while pushing down hard into my face...crotch rubbing against my lips & tongue!!! You feel me in you as your cum keeps flowing…juices dripping down my chin & cheeks…thighs locked tight around my head…your breath in short quick gasps…trying to get air…

Suddenly there is a jerk…the elevator begins to move again. I quickly get up, wiping my face while you adjust your skirt. We straighten up as best we can…when the doors open there is a small crowd gathered…we are a bit disheveled…shaken but not stirred. We smile slightly…you excuse yourself…a need to take care of the stickiness dripping down between your thighs. I go to the railing & enjoy the view...the City of Lights glowing below…traffic flowing all around me...I’m not worried…we still have to take the elevator down!!!


Submitted by “The Stranger” to Wet052389 over 1 year ago. His note to me……..was a private message with the following and then the story. Quite a talented writer! My all time favorite!

“I can only imagine how gorgeous you are. Sensuous by design...sleek & provocative...elegant & alluring...dangerously seductive. The very fabric from which dreams & fantasies are woven!!! Take care & be well Young One. May your travels treat you kindly...”

Words put together like this are to be saved and shared!
Anna
Published by EasyRider22
11 years ago
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Spikedn69
Spikedn69 2 years ago
That was quite a creative story. I was mesmerized and more turned on than most of the videos on here. I felt myself getting wetter and wetter as it progressed. Suzanne XO
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Paul6748
Paul6748 2 years ago
I think a soft, sensual kiss as the elevator goes down. Even the hypocrites of Paris couldn't deny you that!
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xx1236
xx1236 3 years ago
Stuck elevators can produce some erotic times..!!
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mavuk1
mavuk1 3 years ago
WOW.??
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xx1236
xx1236 3 years ago
A very informed writer. She knows female anatomy ,well..!!
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budlear
budlear 4 years ago
so well written; setting the scene and then the "climax"
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Rooster60 4 years ago
to EasyRider22 : Glad there are still some gentlemen out there :smile: Maybe you'll check out the posts on my profile, there may be a couple of stories you'll like
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EasyRider22
EasyRider22 Publisher 4 years ago
to Rooster60 : A very nice gentleman sent that to us years ago. Well written and a sexy story. 
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Rooster60 4 years ago
Really nice story, thanks
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sweetii
sweetii 5 years ago
Very nice!
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EasyRider22
EasyRider22 Publisher 5 years ago
to Myka125 : Just don't look out! 
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Myka125
Myka125 5 years ago
Lovely story, we have been there too but I'm a bit uncomfortable with heights so no sex in the lift. (Lots in the hotel later though :wink:
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damiens
damiens 5 years ago
So exciting tale in Paris
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Nickyhere
Nickyhere 6 years ago
How wonderful!
I was at that very place yesterday.
Such an exciting experience and wonderful writing.
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Newblue69 6 years ago
to EasyRider22 : I did!
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EasyRider22
EasyRider22 Publisher 6 years ago
to Newblue69 : Glad you enjoyed!
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Newblue69 6 years ago
Beautiful and sexy
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rockme
rockme 8 years ago
inspiration comes 2 my mind
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bianca44
bianca44 8 years ago
Just got back from Paris. A solo business trip. Wish I had had an elevator lover there.
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ReetaL
ReetaL 9 years ago
......and there was I thinking it was two girls in the elevator!
Was in Paris recently with my partner/girlfriend and eavesdropped on two much younger girls ( in their 20's ) on an adjacent table as one of them inexpertly tried to talk the other one into bed....
We didn't bother with the Eifel Tower -been there before, but could see it from our tiny apartment in Montmartre and had anyone with a telescope been looking our way, they'd have seen us getting each other off as part of the view....!
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timbo101
Mmm, just read this and I have to agree. Very talented, short story but very erotic and sensual. As were his words afterwards.

Maybe I can take inspiration from this in my own attempts at erotic strory telling!

Love your profile by the way - I'm just starting to make my way through your wonderful galleries.

Tim
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EasyRider22
EasyRider22 Publisher 10 years ago
Thanks for the comment! This is still one of our favorites. Glad you enjoyed!
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EasyRider22
EasyRider22 Publisher 11 years ago
Thanks for the comment. He really has a way with words!
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