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    sweetii Posty

    What's in my mind

    Your eyes, emeraldgreen
    Most beautiful I've ever seen

    Thoughts, chaos in my mind
    A storm, making my eyes blind

    Like a merry-go-round
    I'm feeling off the ground

    Rainbows appear
    Whenever you come near

    Two bodies in motion
    Drowning in loves ocean

    Take me higher, bring me above
    On the rollercoaster of love

    I'm open wide
    For you. Tonight.
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    foundnemo04
    Nice!
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    Java-Joe
    I'm thinking about my former lover lately.  This poem reminds me of our first time.  It was unexpected, and VERY risky, so there was a lot of free-fall.  It was lovely (beautiful, emeraldgreen, rainbows) and scary (chaos, drowning, rollercoaster) all at the same time.  Thanks, Julia, for the reminders.  Can you say if what you've written above is based on your experience or your imagination?
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    Java-Joe
    do sweetii : I can see part of your journey through language when I read this poem.  It makes me very curious about you.
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    sweetii
    do Java-Joe : Yes, it is written by me. Very happy if you like it :smile:
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    Java-Joe
    Did you write this?  I could not do this well in German :smile:  Tattedchica is right - "erotic and emotional" come right through.  Thank you for sharing this art.
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    sweetii
    do Tattedchica : Thank you! :smile:
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    Tattedchica
    Really nice post... erotic and emotional
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    sweetii
    do Bea_S : Danke dir liebe Bea! :smile:
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    Bea_S
    Wow! Wunderschön. :smile:
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