DNA Valkyrie New Novel I'm Writing

Hi, guys! I recently started writing a new Light Novel-type, erotic, H, serialized, web novel and it is getting published every week. New chapters every week. The series is titled: 'DNA Valkyrie' and it is an erotica, Neo-Noir story with Humanoid Dinosaurs.
I would appreciate it to have a few of you read the first chapters of the book so I could get some feedback in the process. :)
More info and the official cover reveal here: http://seishi.xyz/…/announcement-dna-valkyrie-new-hentai-we…
Link for the early access to ALL the currently published chapters if that interests you: https://www.patreon.com/Jimjim3dx
Thank you!